Its finished! Pilot Episode go!

So it is Finally finished the Pilot Episode to Auror. I am currently planning on the second episode script as well as a character guide. This is the first draft. And for those who have seen the original Auror stuff, I have changed it. A lot. For right now it is a diamond in the rough and as I feel the need to edit and change it, I will. for now

Here it is.

http://zacharrell.deviantart.com/journal/#/d5fp2g5

Feed back is appreciated. Constructive Crit please.